Okay, I came down with another topic, which is pretty much what I did on my unit II assignment.
Human sleep cycle has been decreasing slowly as time progresses, technology has been one of the main factors that causes us to sleep less due to their blue light effect. I choose this simply because technology has impact our life for the good and the bad, and it is something that is hard to let go of... theres always something to do to the point of addiction that ruins our health and sleep cycle.
Try adding "The" to the front of the thesis, without the the it sounded awkward to me.
ReplyDeleteJust a little grammar thing too- add "s" at the end of factors. Cuz you said "one of the," so now you need to use an s.